Wednesday, March 24, 2010

fishing adventure story

I found a under water city they said where was no such thing but I Jr Jr found it.(Earlier that day) Ring ring I woke up to the same old ringing alarm clock "bang" I hear a loud shot from a shotgun out side of the tent I knew than it was breakfast time I unzipped and took one step out side when a cow that was in the woods was starting in front of me "a cow in the woods wow I have not even seen a deer but I see a cow" as I thought to my self out loud. Bang "ah ah holy I hop" the cow dropped.....dead my dad had shoot it I look over at the lake and saw my mom cooking breakfast eggs, bird, and cow my dad announced that "we where having fish for dinner so let's go catch breakfast Jr Jr" . Slowly I walked with my dad to the lake and I knew for next two hours on a boat we would catch nothing so we get on the boat then as soon as we where leaving a chicken came me out of the water and scared the socks off my feet as my shoes staid on.

My dad fell off the boat I yelled "holy Mario" and did stay on the boat I thought to my self did that "chicken fly out of the water, are my pants wet from being scared or my dad falling off the boat this where question that had answers I did not know". So we want on with the day and boated out so about a hour later we got a nibble on the rode and we pulled it out of the water and we had a chicken on the line that was still alive. I thought that this was a bad day I did not catch any fish just chickens but the day just got a worse I saw a flying shark "wow I'm going to die from a flying shark, this day sucks so far". I tried to run but I was in a boat, in the middle of the lake and my dad fell off the boat again, flipping the boat too so I fell off I was sinking to the bottom of the sea.

I woke up under flying in a submarine a thought but it said on a sticky note on my head not a submarine the fastest boat in the world I did not know where my dad was so I went to the front of the boat and not believe my eye but I'm not surprise but a chicken was driving the boat he said that there is a under water silver city that the sharks had before but because they can fly they are eating the chickens since they started to flying so the under water city was there's to take over and hide from the sharks but some how they needed my help they think I the one to help them get the city. I yelled "What the crap how can I do that when chicken can't live under water and there is flying sharks we are going to die WOW" the chickens look at each other then started to laugh I think then a alarm went off and red lights every where they said to get to the battle stations and fire I looked at them like chickens that can talk, they showed me where the guns where and I was shooting milk at the flying shark behind us sharks melt when they touch milk we where going to the under water silver city to take it over. We stopped and and just dropped under water to go to the under water city.

It was about 30 minutes until we got to the silver city it was at the deepest part of the ocean. when we got there was no sharks but deer fish it was a deer that had the same features as a fish so I yelled "I give up are aliens real to" there was no answer so the chickens got out leaving me in the submarine the deer fish where looking at me funny one said "look at the freak mommy" the chickens swam out with a red rock got in the submarine and went quickly to the surface they throw the red rock out side of the submarine and all of the flying shark came at the red rock but a big explosion and all the flying shark stopped flying but I turned around and got hit in the head. I woke up in the tent I swear I was here this morning "ow well" so I went back to sleep.

1 comment:

  1. Good story with good paragraphs and good organization i would give it 4/5

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