Tuesday, April 13, 2010

Fix it, a gamer story

There are many types of video games. All based on different varieties of games such as sports, action, and shooting. You can play with different people around the world, at what ever time like five in the morning when your family is sound sleeping, so keep the volume down. You don't want to wake your family up while playing they will not like it.

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  1. Comma between like and five. 3rd seteance is a run on. I don't know what I was supose to say.

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  2. There are many types of video games. All based on different varieties of games such as sports, action, and shooting. You can play with people around the world, at whatever time you choose. You could play at 5 in the morning but, you need to keep the volume down. You don't want to wake your family up while your playing, they won't like that. 5/5

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