This is how you do a run on sentence it just runs on and runs until it changes the subject that might be a long time like forever it might just be one long sentence that goes down the page.
Run on sentence is a bad sentence because it does not sound smart if you read it out loud it just goes on and on you don't take a breathe in a run on that is a bad thing you might need to take a breathe in the sentence.
Some run on sentences have random things in them because you did not know they stopped like this one it just keeps on going and running like a bear is after you and if there is a stop the bear gets you.
One run on sentence might be a boy is walking through the woods and then a bear is going to try to eat him so the boy runs away from the bear but the bear is much faster than the boy so the boy throw food at the bear and he stopped going after the boy.
A girl was in the lake and a fish came up and looked at her she got scarred and swam away the fish followed her to the beach but the poor fish can't walk on land so the fish swam to the bottom of the lake to be alone.
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Since, a run on sentence just goes on and on, they can end up never stopping. Possibly, that could be till the end of the page.
ReplyDeleteRun on sentences, arent really the best way to catch the reader. Not sounding like the person who wrote it, very educated. In a speech or a story, where you commonly see run on sentences, you need to take a breath.
Its like a bear is chasing you. You dont have time to slow down and take a breath, you just keep on going. Ramdoness is a huge part of a run on sentence.
Although, the boy runs away from the bear, it is faster than him. Gaining speed the boy turns to thgrough food at the bear. Being distracted the bear begins to eat the food, leaving the boy alive and a point added to his cardio.
While a girl was swimming, a friendly fish came up from beneatht he seaweed to greet her. Unfortunatly she was frightend and swam to shore. Being lonely, and not able to walk on land. The poor little fish slowly drifted to the bottom.